Numb (Mystery comic)

Possibly meanspirited ghosts and skeletons in the closet.

Levi and Sue attempt to meet again after a long pause in their friendship. However Levi ends up in an accident that has something else behind it than just careless street crossing. Old strains are being brought up and something sinister is lurking around.

I'm fairly sure there's prettier way to link his but this is the simplest for me: https://tapastic.com/series/Numb

This comic is full watercolor colored, just so that I could get over my fear of water and colors. So far this plan works pretty good. I hope you enjoy!

woooah i never really see water color comics thats hecka rad. and it turned out sooo pretty. ima check it out

Trusty Shamrock wrote:woooah i never really see water color comics thats hecka rad. and it turned out sooo pretty. ima check it out

Thank you! I'm glad it's working well, I had little to no clue how to make it work but it was worth the risk!

I checked it out, and I gotta say, it's interesting! Some parts are confusing and there's a few typos, but altogether, definitely something I'll keep following.

Viktor wrote:I checked it out, and I gotta say, it's interesting! Some parts are confusing and there's a few typos, but altogether, definitely something I'll keep following.

Thanks for the feedback! Would you say the confusion comes from the story itself/there's many unanswered questions or is it an issue with my pacing/storytelling choices?

I would say it's more that in some scenes, it's hard to tell where the narrative is at the moment. More establishing shots may help with that. The old man and the little girl are the most confusing, since I'm having a hard time figuring out how they relate to the other characters. The other characters are introduced just fine, so I'd get a second opinion there.

Okay thanks! I have gotten more focused on establishing shots on the pages I'm working on now. This is valuable information!