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Post by scullpanda on Fri Jul 15, 2016 12:31 am

So Im having a hard time with my comic Wait...What's description I'm moving away for just gag stuff to more of a diary of the main character the good and bad in her life and the lessons learned from all of it

This is it right now but Im just not happy with it please help

Meet Diana, a weird college student with a weird life, Her family and friends are a constant source of amusement so she keeps a Diary and this is its best and worst moments,advice basically its her Life.

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Re: Need help with wording for my comics Description

Post by Viktor (Macrotis) on Sun Jul 17, 2016 8:59 pm

I'd nix the 'meet Diana' bit. Try starting out with the diary and what's in it. Show what's in the story, really.

Watch your grammar, too. There's a few mistakes and I know grammar mistakes will turn readers off.

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Post by scullpanda on Mon Jul 18, 2016 4:24 pm

Thanks guys OwO
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